@TheDevilsHorse
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 4:15

Lost in thoughts, a journey of the mind!

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Let me know if it resonated with you and your feedbacks, your opinions, your insights are most are truly valuable and I can't thank you enough for the difference you are making. By putting those likes and your inputs and motivating me in bringing these poems to you. And I'll meet you in the next well, I have a very interesting and exciting news to share and it's about my poetic journey, so just watch out for the next one. Well, thank you so much, guys

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@peeli
preethy uthup
@peeli · 2:31
Hi, Adarsh. I particularly like the thought of the mewing of the cats and mowing of thoughts. It is so, so nice because it's a very new expression that I'm hearing and that's kind of quaint and sweet and I like it. And particularly you ask like, do you have these thoughts? Yeah, definitely. And sometimes your thoughts are your dreams, actually your aspirations. You really want to be there
@GreyMatter
Himanshi Thakur
@GreyMatter · 4:03
Hi, Adarsh. So this is the first swell that I got to listen from you. And one of our mutual swell friends had invited me to your swell. And this is such a wonderful poem, honestly. And I am particularly fascinated by AB Rhyming scale and I know that it it's extremely difficult to rhyme. To rhyme and to make sense simultaneously is a big feat to achieve as an author, as and as a poet. So congratulations for that
@Swell
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15

Welcome to Swell!

@TheDevilsHorse
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 4:26

@GreyMatter Thank You so much for appreciating and going in so much depth… I am humbled and elated at same moment. Gratitude 🙏

It is such an honor to receive such a healthy, such a wide variety of feedback and appreciation. I would definitely take a screenshot of it and keep it as a memoir. It's certainly the one that I have got since I've started writing. So thank you so much. Himanshi, you have made it worthwhile about the Devil's horse, the entire collection. Thank you so much. Have a good night. Have a great day tomorrow. Bye bye. I'll see you around
@GreyMatter
Himanshi Thakur
@GreyMatter · 4:04
Hi Adarsh. I'm glad that I made you happy and you felt motivated after listening to my reply and it was not an expert review. You humbled me. I am just an avid reader. I don't write or express myself as much. I just try my best to read, just to explore more and more authors and writers and their creations. So you humbled me. But I'm glad, I'm glad that I motivated you. I contributed in your betterment in some or the other way
@MyCuratedTales
Aditi Kapoor
@MyCuratedTales · 1:20

@TheDevilsHorse

But the whole idea should be to keep them at bay, work on them at the right time, and don't let it overpower you so much that your now moment gets disturbed. So this is what I wanted to say, and I eagerly wait for all your swells, and I'm pretty much excited for what you're going to bring next. All the best and keep swelling. Bye
@kadambarigupta
Kadambari Gupta
@kadambarigupta · 0:53
Hello Adarsh. Sir, a very good evening to you and I would say that you make my day. You know whenever I hear your swell I am so mesmerized the way, the topic that you choose, the wordings that you use you know I really get amazed and I'm so so happy that I am am able to hear your swell. All I can say is that this was again a terrific poem, a masterpiece and lost in thoughts, a journey of the mind
@TheDevilsHorse
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 1:54

@peeli

Hi, Peeli. Thank you so much for sharing. Yes, I actually put that cat one and I was like, you know, I want to make it less intense on a lighter side because when I was writing The Devil's Horse and this is actually the 9th poem, you know, sorry, it's the 8th one. So by the time I had written seven of them, I was overwhelmed with my own thought process. So I wanted to just have just dwelled in down that aspect
@TheDevilsHorse
Adarsh Rai
@TheDevilsHorse · 1:46

@MyCuratedTales

It goes back to when I was two years old. Sometimes I say in Hindi, shayad vardan bihar abhishab bimujah he mayor apnea SOJ or apnijo mary vivid memory or McAfee. Nonetheless, it's always amazing to hear from you. Your perspective, your nuances, your appreciation. And I'm glad that you like this poem and you went through your own thought process. So thank you so much. Once again. I sincerely appreciate it. Thank you
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