Dilemma of An Artist | Poetry | Creative Writing | Swell | Orphic Paracosm
Hi, amazing listeners. This is Orphic Paracosm, and today again, I've come up with a poem. This poem is about an artist. The dilemma of an artist. So here we go. This pathetic feeling in my stomach, in my lungs, like several hot or crystals have blocked my one pipe. Like something just peeling every inch of my skin from the top of my head to the tip of my toes. Like infinite cyclones have emerged in the fathomless ocean inside me
Wow. It's amazing. Thank you. Thank you so much for sharing these thoughts. Only an artist can understand the emotional behavior, the chaos in the mind. I am an artist. Can very well relate to each word superb. Thank you so much for sharing
Thank you so much, sir. I'm glad to know that you related to it as an artist, and it really means a lot to me. Thank you
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Wow, that's one beautiful poetic creation. I absolutely loved the imagery that you created with your words and how beautifully it projected the emotions. I mean, it's difficult to transfer your emotions in and imagine it through words, so kudos to you. And I would also like to bring to your notice that your voice, the way you recited the poem, is phenomenal. Like, it really suited the mood of the poetry, and you encompassed it perfectly. So, yeah, keep posting
Hi. Thank you so much for listening to this well and for providing this feedback. It really means a lot. Really appreciate it. And I'm so sorry for the late reply, because I was engaged with my exams till now, but now, as they're over, I have a lot of time in my hand. So I'll be more active on Swell and I'll be sharing more posts, more poems. So that's a great thing