@jaimichaela_
Jai Collington
@jaimichaela_ · 2:20

Empty I Love You

article image placeholderUploaded by @jaimichaela_
So my goal is to be able to share my voice with you guys. So over the next, however long it takes, I'm going to be sharing some pieces from my first two books that I wrote. And so this one is from no Sugar to coat with. And the title is called Empty. I love you. Empty. I love you. It sat there like a well crafted vase in the center of a dead dining room table. Placed mats vacant of plates, utensils, cups

#NoSugarToCoatWith #JordainBrockPoetry #SpeakYourPeace

@DBPardes
Deborah Pardes
@DBPardes · 0:26

@jaimichaela_

This is beautiful and mysterious, and it really settled in me. And I looked over, actually, at my own dining room table in a literal way, and I was looking at this. I happened to have an empty vase sitting on my dining room table. And it just brought me to thinking about all the metaphors of that. So I appreciate your work here very much
@LittleBitofD
DeeDee Thompson
@LittleBitofD · 0:15
This was beautiful. I appreciate how your words really curated the scene for me. I was able to visualize what you spoke. I appreciate this piece. Thank you for sharing
@jaimichaela_
Jai Collington
@jaimichaela_ · 1:50

@DBPardes

Never any flowers put into the vase, no purpose served or anything like that. And I just began to write how I felt. But releasing it verbally is a totally different ball game. I felt it in a new way, this go around. So I'm glad, glad that you were able to kind of pick up on the metaphors and apply them to the spaces in your life. Thanks so much for sharing
@jaimichaela_
Jai Collington
@jaimichaela_ · 0:34

@LittleBitofD

Thank you so much for taking the time to listen. I really do appreciate it. It takes a lot to put your words out there. It took a lot for me to write them and then to put them out there verbally spoken out loud so that people can hear was another huge feat. So thank you so much for your feedback. I sincerely appreciate it
@DarkMoonMusings
J Stout
@DarkMoonMusings · 0:12
Empty. I love you. I found this to be really haunting. I loved it. Thank you so much for sharing it and putting yourself out there
@Renee_Slay
Renee Slay
@Renee_Slay · 0:57
It's hard for them to find the right inflections of voice, the power behind certain words. And when we read it, we bring that passion forward that we felt in writing it. And it's beautiful. And you nailed it with this. I appreciate you sharing. I completely get it. And, girl, keep reading them because I want to hear. Thank you
@Swell
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15

Welcome to Swell!

@jaimichaela_
Jai Collington
@jaimichaela_ · 1:11

@Renee_Slay

And so, again, I think I'm just bringing the words now to life like they were before when I wrote them and when I felt them. And I'm hoping that as I share things that I've written in the past, that I get an opportunity to reflect on those spaces, reflect on where I've grown, and be able to then create new piece is to be able to share with the world
0:00
0:00