I want to wrestle with the amorphous titan of missing you. But I can't grab the absence it engulfs the atmosphere weaves through a fractured distance. Your whispers infuse the immediate and touch, lingers warm lips in negative space. The mirage of us shimmers as days loop and loom in a prism of memories plagued by polarity
Laura L (she/her)
@Loloflow · 0:48
It. Wow. The mirage of us. I love this so much. It took me to the place where you've lived. Something so intense. I and in the aftermath, it's almost like you wonder if it was all a dream, but it's still filling up your space in so many ways. Wow. You really took me to another dimension with this. Thank you
Creative Reader
@MoonPoet · 0:46
You. Good morning, Adenike. This is Stephen. I found this poem really beautiful. I lean towards that intuitive style of writing myself, and I think you've done something really wonderful with it. Like Amorphous titans and the mirage of us, the negative space. You've mastered the timing of that negative space with your words. So, kudos. Great job. Thank you for sharing it. Bye