It with me. You had to contend with pain, step on thorns. So you left. And I will never let anyone step into my house again. It was barren before, but I did not know how bad things were till you told me so. I wished to talk to no one at all. For in my soul there were sorrows untold. If I relax the vigil, I may let them show. And again and again, watch me. People walk out of that door in my house
Maurice Lekea
@malekea · 2:04
Because the loneliness, like your previous poem, is not only physical. I mean, it's not physical loneliness where you don't have anyone around you. You can have someone around you or you can be in a relationship, married or boyfriend, girlfriend, but still feel alone. Meaning that you are not connected to the person. The two of you are not connected. Therefore you feel alone. And that also many people are connected to that. And I am included
Hello. Thank you so much for your kind words. It definitely made my day. Thank you once again
Swell Team
@Swell · 0:15
Rakesh Kumar
@RakeshKumar2023 · 0:43
Hello. Beautiful, multilayered and full of many meanings. Amazing. And what an expression. And playing with the ideas. And you are letting the listeners to think the way you. The way they want to think. And it can be interpreted in many ways. So beautiful, beautiful writing